Post by percy on Dec 12, 2007 17:22:16 GMT -5
me and a friend are making a metalcore/punk-pop band called unique similarities. im the song writer, and i was just wondering if some of you could give feedback please, thanks. the music may seem very deep and depressing, but the message in the first one is basically the only person that matters is yourself, in food for the damned, it is to search deep inside yourself and solve every problem you have before it eats away at you.
Dark House
I’m just standing here
But you’re the one I fear
I’m the one to kill this year
I try to hold back this tear
For you make me feel like shit
Nothings left of me, not one bit
But now I stand up, something new
I stand up, and I say to all of you
I’m not going to listen to you anymore
(Anymore)
I’m not going to carry on being tore
(Being tore)
I am going to be proud of who I am
(Who I am)
Whatever you say, I don’t give a damn
(give a damn)
We are the ones you hate
We are the ones without a mate
We are the ones that die alone
We are the ones who daren’t go home
I go home to my family
They take a look at me
They dislike what they see
They dislike who I wish to be
For you cause me so much pain
Beating me time and time again
But now I stand up, something new
I stand up, and I say to all of you
I’m not going to listen to you anymore
(Anymore)
I’m not going to carry on being tore
(Being tore)
I am going to be proud of who I am
(Who I am)
Whatever you say, I don’t give a damn
(give a damn)
We are the ones you hate
We are the ones without a mate
We are the ones that die alone
We are the ones who daren’t go home
Food For the Damned
The air is rising
(The air is rising)
We are searching
(We are searching)
Searching for hate
(Searching for hate)
I know what you think, I know what you see
I know what you think, I know what you see
I know what you think, I know what you see
But overall I know that you are the one for me
You are the one
You are the one
You are the one I see
You are the one
You are the one
You are the one I wish to be
Don’t you realise you’re in danger.
The ice is melting
The grass is growing
The ice is melting
It’s not worth showing
Fuck the world
Fuck the world
Fuck the world and hide
Fuck the world
Fuck the world
Fuck the world suicide
they do still need editing, but well do that when were adding music
Dark House
I’m just standing here
But you’re the one I fear
I’m the one to kill this year
I try to hold back this tear
For you make me feel like shit
Nothings left of me, not one bit
But now I stand up, something new
I stand up, and I say to all of you
I’m not going to listen to you anymore
(Anymore)
I’m not going to carry on being tore
(Being tore)
I am going to be proud of who I am
(Who I am)
Whatever you say, I don’t give a damn
(give a damn)
We are the ones you hate
We are the ones without a mate
We are the ones that die alone
We are the ones who daren’t go home
I go home to my family
They take a look at me
They dislike what they see
They dislike who I wish to be
For you cause me so much pain
Beating me time and time again
But now I stand up, something new
I stand up, and I say to all of you
I’m not going to listen to you anymore
(Anymore)
I’m not going to carry on being tore
(Being tore)
I am going to be proud of who I am
(Who I am)
Whatever you say, I don’t give a damn
(give a damn)
We are the ones you hate
We are the ones without a mate
We are the ones that die alone
We are the ones who daren’t go home
Food For the Damned
The air is rising
(The air is rising)
We are searching
(We are searching)
Searching for hate
(Searching for hate)
I know what you think, I know what you see
I know what you think, I know what you see
I know what you think, I know what you see
But overall I know that you are the one for me
You are the one
You are the one
You are the one I see
You are the one
You are the one
You are the one I wish to be
Don’t you realise you’re in danger.
The ice is melting
The grass is growing
The ice is melting
It’s not worth showing
Fuck the world
Fuck the world
Fuck the world and hide
Fuck the world
Fuck the world
Fuck the world suicide
they do still need editing, but well do that when were adding music